【質問 No. 24646】 英作文の添削依頼(前編) |
zoro |
2024-04-29 15:45:08 |
大変、混雑をしているところ、恐れ入ります。ご回答は、先生が落ち着かれてからで結構です。今回も、私が勝手に考えた課題になりますが、英作文の添削をお願い致します。
課題: Inappropriate advertisements should be regulated.
I think that inappropriate advertisements should be regulated, for the following reasons.
Firstly, in our society, 80percent of people have their own smartphones and many of them are overly dependent on them because smartphones can give you any information they want to get. However, once we access a website, almost every time an unnecessary advertisement pops up, and it seems very unpleasant. Once something unnecessary thing comes into our head, we cannot concentrate on what we should do, since such advertisements often distract our mind.
よろしくお願い致します。
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