【質問 No. 24606】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-04-18 18:56:53 |
先生、前回の添削とアドバイスを、ありがとうございました。本日も、英文要約の添削を、よろしくお願い致します。
The impact of climate change on global agricultural practices is a pressing concern. Rising temperatures, unpredictable weather patterns, and increased incidence of droughts and floods are adversely affecting crop yields. These changes challenge traditional farming methods and threaten food security worldwide. In response, farmers are adopting more resilient agricultural practices, such as drought-resistant crops, improved irrigation techniques, and alternative farming methods like vertical farming.
Simultaneously, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable agriculture to reduce the environmental footprint of farming. This includes practices like organic farming, reduced use of chemical fertilizers and pesticides, and integrated pest management. These methods aim to maintain soil health, conserve water, and preserve biodiversity, ensuring long-term agricultural productivity.
However, transitioning to sustainable and resilient agricultural practices presents challenges. It requires significant investment in research and development, as well as in educating farmers about new techniques. Furthermore, small-scale farmers in developing countries often lack the resources and access to technology needed for such a transition. Addressing these disparities is crucial for global efforts to combat the impacts of climate change on agriculture and ensure food security for all.
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[解答](要約) With <temperatures>(→global temperatures) keep rising, the <affect>(→effect) on global agricultural practices has become a serious problem<,>(→;) as a result, farmers have <improved>(→had to improve) their agricultural techniques. In order to alleviate the burden on farming, a lot of groundbreaking farming methods have been introduced in <the various>(→various) fields. However, there are disadvantages <in>(→to) such new practices. For example, the cost of research and <development>(→development of such practices) <and>(→as well as) educating farmers about new techniques can be costly. There is also not enough cost to cover <materials>(→the materials) and <technology>(→technology of farming in the whole world).
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) zoro さんの、飽きることのない努力に、敬服させられています。大変な苦労をされていることと、ねぎらいの言葉をかけたくなります。今回も、気候変動と、農業という問題にメスを入れようとする、世界の動きが感じられます。これは、日本の問題でもあります。気候変動によって、農業が崩壊するようなことがあったら、全世界の死を意味します。小さなことで、小競り合いをしている暇はありません。人類に共通した、この問題に、世界が協力しあうべき時ではないでしょうか?
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