【質問 No. 24569】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-04-14 09:30:47 |
先生、ご添削ありがとうございました。本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
[原文]: In the US, student loans are often a hot topic of debate. Over the past several decades, the cost of US college education has increased faster than the rate of inflation. As a result, many people have taken out student loans to pay for their college education. Today, millions of Americans have a large amount of loan debt. Those who view student loans positively point to the increase in the number of college graduates. In 1960, only 7.7% of people had received higher education, but by 2021, that number was 37.7%. This increase shows that student loans have worked well to give more Americans greater access to higher education. Supporters also point out aspects of the loan system, such as the ability to apply for it regardless of income and the option to start repayment after college graduation.
On the other hand, those who want to reevaluate student loans point out the reality that a significant number of people are struggling to repay them. The average student loan debt in the United States is around $30,000 per person, and approximately 10% cannot be paid back. The consequences of loan default are severe, including having the money taken out of people’s wages and losing the ability to borrow money in the future.
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[解答](要約) In the US, the number of <students>(→students has increased) who <cannot>(→can) go to <university>(→a university) that they want <to go, but students can borrow>(→by borrowing) money from <student>(→a student) support organization. <The>(→However, the) <reason why>(→削除)the number of students who get loans <has>(→has also) increased <is that students can have heighly education by going to college>(→, but there are many former students who cannot pay back their loans). (This is becoming a serious problem in the US today. を追加). <Nowadays,>(→削除) <with>(→With) a large number of students <depending>(→who depended) on student loans<, and many of them>(→削除) have no choice but to procrastinate on repaying <them>(→them for the rest of their lives without being able to borrow any more money).
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[回答](感想) 今回は、あまりにも絞りすぎて、舌足らずになってしまいましたね! 問題は、奨学金を借りて大学へ行けるようになったことはいいのですが、卒業後、その返済に追われ、生活が成り立たなくなっている卒業生が増えている、ということで、今、アメリカで、大問題になっており、思い切って、卒業生の借金を、チャラにしてやろうという動きさえ出てきているのです。さもないと、アメリカ人の可成り人々が、生活できない状態に、陥ってしまっている、ということなのです。添削が読み取りにくくなってしまったかもしれませんが、なんとか解読して、内容を読み取ってください。
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