【質問 No. 24508】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-04-07 16:07:58 |
昨日も、ご回答を、ありがとうございました。本日も、英文要約の添削をお願い致します。
原文: In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards using technology in education. Many schools have introduced digital devices such as tablets and laptops into classrooms, believing that they can enhance students’ learning experiences. Proponents argue that these tools can make learning more interactive, engaging, and personalized to each student’s needs.
Supporters of technology in education point out that it can provide students with access to a vast array of educational resources, such as online textbooks, videos, and educational apps. They also argue that technology can help students develop important digital literacy skills that are increasingly necessary in today’s world. Furthermore, technology can facilitate collaboration and communication between students and teachers, even outside of the classroom.
However, critics of technology in education argue that it can also have negative effects on student learning. They worry that excessive screen time can lead to distraction, reduced attention spans, and even addiction to technology. Some studies have also suggested that reading on screens may lead to lower comprehension and retention compared to reading on paper. Additionally, there are concerns about the digital divide, as not all students have equal access to technology at home, which can exacerbate existing educational inequalities.
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[解答](要約): These days, many schools have introduced IT technology in classrooms, which enhance <studen's>(→students') learning motivation. With technology in education, students can access huge <amount>(→amounts) of efficient materials, improving their IT <literary>(→literacy), and there is a benefit in facilitating communication between teachers and students. However, experts say that the scary thing about IT education is that students are too grued <in>(→on) the screen of their mobile tablets. Moreover, <Since>(→since) some students cannot concentrate <in>(→on) their studies with their <gadget>(→gadgets), there could be a risk that not all students learn equally.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想): 相変わらず、熱心に、要約作業に、勤(いそ)しんでいるご様子に、感心させられています。しかしながら、毎回拝見していて、要約という課題を、採点するとなったら、大変だろうと、つくづく思ってしまいます。私自身も、大学院の受験生に、A4サイズ一杯の英文について、先ず、日本語で要約し、さらに、その要約を英訳させる、といった問題を出したものです。これは、先ず、日本語で要約するので、比較的的確にできるのですが、それを英訳する段になると、アラが見えてくるのを感じたりしました。zoro さんは、どのような方法で、要約をなさっているのですか? 非常に興味があるところです。
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