【質問 No. 24263】 英文要約添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-03-03 16:18:25 |
先生、前回の添削、ありがとうございました。本日も、英文要約の添削を、お願い致します。
[原文] A child is most intelligent when the reality before him arouses in him a high degree of attention, interest, concentration, involvement -- in short, when he cares most about what he is doing. This is why we should make schoolrooms and schoolwork as interesting and exciting as possible, not just so that school will be a pleasant place, but so that children in school will act intelligently and get into the habit of acting intelligently. The case against boredom in school is the same as the case against fear; it makes children behave stupidly, some of them on purpose, most of them because they cannot help it.
If this goes on long enough, as it does in school, they forget what it is like to grasp at something, as they once grasped at everything, with all their minds and senses; they forget how to deal positively and aggressively with life and experience, to think and say, “I see it! I get it! I can do it!”
[解答](要約) In general, children will be intelligent when he concentrates on what he is doing. In order for children to be intelligent, it is inevitably necessary to set up schools as places where children can act <efficiently>(→efficiently and intelligently).
It results from <boresome>(→boredom) that children cannot <confine>(→concentrate) themselves <and>(→but) act stupidly. If this lasts long, children will lose their motivation <for>(→to) study.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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原文の言葉は、さほど難しくはないですが、これを上手に要約するのは、大変な仕事です。とても、よくまとまっています。この調子で、進めてください。
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