【質問 No. 20768】 英作文の添削依頼（中編）  |
zoro |
2022-11-29 05:51:18 |
先生、ご添削ありがとうございました。本日は「中編」をお願い致します。
1.「さらには、先進国の人々の善意は、必ずしも困窮する人達に伝わると言う訳ではない」
Moreover, the benevolence of people in developed countries is not always connected to needy persons.
2.「例えば、水不足に苦しむ人達がいると考えられる地域に、ボランティアを派遣して井戸を掘っても、権力者に横取りをされてしまい、本当に綺麗な水を必要とする人達に、提供が出来ないと言うことが多々ある」
For example, if skilled volunteers are sent to areas where people are considered to suffer (with→from) the lack of water and dig wells, it often happens that an autocratic leader (snatch→snatches) them, not providing for people who really need clean water.
3.「これが示す通り、私達は、発展途上国の人々と先進国の人々には、大きな風俗の違いがあることを理解しなければならない」
As shown by this, we should understand that there is a great different manner between people in developing countries and developed countries.
本日もよろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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1. Moreover, the benevolence of people in developed countries is not always connected to needy people.
2. For example, even if skilled volunteers are sent to areas where people are considered to be suffering from the lack of water and dig wells for them, it often happens that some autocratic leader comes out and snatches them, instead of providing for those people who really need clean water.
3. As shown by this example, we need to understand that there is a great difference in manners between people in developing and developed countries.
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