|【質問 No. 19213】 英作文の添削依頼（前編）
| 先生、ご添削ありがとうございました。本日は Do the benefits of free trade outweigh the disadvantages? の添削をお願い致します。
I do not think the benefits of free trade outweigh the disadvantages for the following reasons.
Firstly, there is a benefit in free trade in that tariffs that impose products are removed.
However, if cheap agricultual products are imported from overseas to Japan, it will make farmers in Japan faced a crisis since their agricultual products do not sell.
Thus, elderly people working in the farm will be suffered from decreasing their job.
|1. I don't think that the benefits of free trade outweigh the disadvantages for the following reasons. |
2. Firstly, it is certain that there is a benefit in free trade in that the tariffs (that are) imposed on products are removed.
3. However, if tariffs are removed, cheap agricultural products will be imported to Japan from overseas, which will make farmers in Japan faced with a crisis since their products will not be sold.
4. Thus, farmers in Japan, (who are) mostly elderly people, will suffer and quit their jobs of working on the farms. This will in turn make the consumers in Japan suffer, who might lose the chance of getting fresh and harmless home-grown agricultural products.