【質問 No. 23508】 英作文の添削依頼(後編) |
zoro |
2023-11-27 05:38:33 |
先生、前回のご添削ありがとうございました。本日は、後編をお願い致します。
1.「最後に、私達の社会には、政治に興味のない人達がたくさんいるということは、さほど驚くべきことではない」
Lastly, it is not a surprisingly fact that in our community today, there are a large number of people who are not interested in politics.
2.「彼らは自分を中心にしてものを考える傾向にあるため、進んで政治について深く知ろうしない」
Such people often tend to think self-centeredly, so they are not willing to understand about politics profoundly.
3.「もし投票が義務化されたら、彼らは、顔で政治家を選ぶといった、いいかげんな決定をする恐れがあり、それにより、有能な候補者は、落選してしまうかもしれない」
If voting were to be made mandatory in Japan, there could be a risk that some people make a sloppy decision and vote for a candidate, which may lose efficient candidates' seats.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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1. Lastly, it is not a <surprisingly>(→surprising) fact that in our community today, there are a large number of people who are not interested in politics.
2. Such people often tend to think <self-centeredly>(→in a self-centered way), so they are not willing to understand <about>(→削除) politics profoundly.
3. If voting were to be made mandatory in Japan, there could be a risk that some people make <a sloppy decision>(→sloppy decisions) and vote for <a candidate>(→candidates who look good), which may <lose>(lead to defeating) efficient <candidates' seats>(→candidates).
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