【質問 No. 23345】 英作文の添削依頼 |
kate |
2023-11-08 16:19:06 |
先生、いつもありがとうございます。また、添削して頂けますでしょうか。どうぞよろしくお願いします。
@ 「人が多いと、地球の状態が悪くなります」
The Earth gets worse due to overpopulation.
A 「100年の間に人が増えすぎて、地球の状態がとても酷くなりました」
Over the past 100 years, there have been too many people, and the condition of the Earth has worsened.
B 「気温が上がったり、自然が壊されたり、大変なことが起こっています。みんなで問題を解決しようとしているけど、もう取り返しのつかないこともあるかもしれない」
It has big problems such as the temperatures have gone up, and nature has broken, people try to solve these problems, but some things might be impossible to fix.
C 「だから、未来を明るくするために、人の数を制限する必要があります」
Therefore, to make the future better, we need to limit the number of people.
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【回答】
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@ The Earth is getting worse and worse due to overpopulation.
A Over the past 100 years, there have been too many people on the earth, the condition of which has become increasingly worsened.
B Some of the big problems are the temperatures that have gone up and the nature that has been broken up by the heat. People are trying to solve these problems one way or another, but so far they have been unable to fix them.
C One way to make the future better is to try to decrease the number of people, particularly in those areas where there are few resources available.
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