【質問 No. 21508】 英作文の添削依頼  |
野村 |
2023-03-18 10:23:13 |
1. 医者にかかったことがある人なら誰でも「痛みはどの程度ですか?」と聞かれたことがあるだろう。
2. 医療ケアにとって本質的なことは、個々の患者から受け取る物語を理解し、それに真摯に応じることで、彼らの生の意味を共有することである。
3. 科学的知識をいくら持ち合わせていても、よき読み手として物語を解釈することが出来なければ、当人が望んでいるようなやり方で患者をケアすることはできないのである。
1. Everyone who see a doctor have been asked that "how much pain do you have ?"
2. The essential thing of medical care is to understand each story of patients , to deal with that seriously and to share the meanings of their lifves .
3. However much scientific knowledge do you have, you can not care patients by the way they want to be , as long as you can not understand their story .
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【回答】
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1. <Everyone>(→Anyone) who <see>(→has seen) a doctor <have been>(→must have been) asked <that>(→削除) "<how>(→How) much pain do you have ?"
2. The essential thing <of>(→in) medical care is to understand each story of patients , to deal with that seriously, and to share the meanings of their lives .
3. <However>(→(No matter) How) much scientific knowledge <do you>(→a doctor may) have, <you>(→he) can not care <patients>(→his patients) <by the way>(→in such a way that) they want to <be>(→be cared) , as long as <you>(→he) can not understand their <story>(→stories). .
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