【質問 No. 24797】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-05-20 09:47:05 |
おはようございます。本日も、英文要約の、添削を、よろしくお願いします。
[原文] The role of Japan in the global economy is a multifaceted and evolving narrative, marked by its unique blend of traditional values and cutting-edge technology. As the world’s third-largest economy, Japan’s influence extends far beyond its geographical boundaries, impacting various global sectors including technology, finance, and international trade.
Japan’s economy, renowned for its technological innovations and manufacturing prowess, particularly in the automobile and electronics industries, has been a driving force in the global market. These sectors not only exemplify Japan’s commitment to quality and efficiency but also contribute significantly to its GDP.
The country’s focus on research and development has led to advancements in various fields, solidifying its status as a leader in technological innovation. However, Japan faces demographic challenges, primarily an aging population and a declining birthrate, which pose significant threats to its workforce and economic growth. The government’s efforts to address these issues through policy reforms and initiatives, including encouraging women’s participation in the workforce and promoting work-life balance, are crucial for sustaining economic vitality.
In the international arena, Japan plays a key role in shaping economic policies and fostering global partnerships. As an active member of international organizations like the G7 and the World Trade Organization, Japan advocates for free trade and multilateral cooperation. Its approach to international relations, balancing its economic interests with diplomatic considerations, is pivotal in maintaining stability in the Asia-Pacific region. Moreover, Japan’s commitment to environmental sustainability and addressing climate change aligns it with global efforts to promote a greener economy.
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【回答】
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Japan’s role in the global economy is a testament to its resilience and adaptability. Navigating demographic challenges, fostering technological advancements, and maintaining a strong presence in international affairs are integral to its continued success. As Japan adapts to changing global dynamics, its economic and technological contributions will remain vital to the worldwide community.
[解答](要約) Thanks to the mix of traditional value and state-of-the-art technology, Japan has been globalized rapidly. Japan today is the largest exporter, which trades various products such as automobiles and electronics. Japan <now is>(→is now) considered a leader in the world in various fields. However, <There>(→there) also exist various problems in Japan, causing economic stagnation due to <aging>(→an aging) society and low birthrate. There <are>(→is) a pile of tasks that the government <in>(→of) Japan should deal with as a member of the G7. It is inevitable for Japan to play <the>(→an) important role <for>(→in) international affairs in the future.
よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) この長い原文を、zoro さんは、どのように裁くのだろう、と固唾を飲んでいると、自分の言葉で、わけもなく要約している様に接し、驚くばかりです。英文中の間違いも少なくなっていますし、この調子で行けば、英検準一級、または、一級も、手の届くところまで、来たのではないか、と思わされます。
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