【質問 No. 24692】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
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2024-05-06 09:26:14 |
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[原文] The growing trend towards urbanization has led to a surge in smart city initiatives, aiming to enhance urban life through technology. Smart cities use digital technology to improve city services, infrastructure, and quality of life. These technologies include IoT (Internet of Things) devices, advanced data analytics, and AI-driven systems, which work together to create more efficient and sustainable urban environments.
One of the key features of smart cities is the optimization of transportation systems. Through the use of sensors and data analytics, traffic flow can be better managed, reducing congestion and travel time. Public transportation systems also benefit from smart technologies, with real-time updates and improved scheduling. Another significant area is energy management. Smart cities utilize renewable energy sources and implement energy-saving technologies to reduce their carbon footprint and promote sustainability.
However, the development of smart cities is not without challenges. The primary concern is the privacy and security of the vast amount of data collected and used by these technologies. There is also the issue of the digital divide; not all residents may have equal access to the benefits of smart city technologies, potentially leading to inequalities. Addressing these concerns is crucial for the successful implementation and acceptance of smart city initiatives.
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[解答](要約) As our society continues to be urbanized, more cities have <become>(→削除) introduced digital technology, creating <better>(→a better) environment. One of the benefits of smart cities is <it's>(→their) convenient and smooth transportation systems. Another merit is <it>(→that they) can reduce <their>(→削除) carbon dioxide. However, there is a disadvantage to the advancement of <the smart>(→smart) cities. For example, <personal>(→the personal) data of people can be concentrated in one place.
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[回答](感想) 今回は、随分と端折ってしまいましたが、内容としては、そういうことだろう、とは思います。訂正された部分について、よく考えて、何がいけなかったのか、考えながら、清書してください。
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