【質問 No. 24552】 英文要約添削依頼(解答) |
zoro |
2024-04-12 09:31:45 |
先生、昨日も、ありがとうございました。最近、大分要約に慣れて来て、大分早く書けるようになって来ています。本当に、いつもありがとうございます。
原文: Electronic waste, or e-waste, is a growing problem worldwide. As technology advances and consumers demand the latest gadgets, the amount of discarded electronic devices is increasing at an alarming rate. Proper management of e-waste is crucial to minimize its impact on the environment and human health.
Recycling e-waste can have numerous benefits. Many electronic devices contain valuable materials such as gold, silver, and copper, which can be recovered and reused. This not only conserves natural resources but also reduces the need for mining, which can have negative environmental consequences. Additionally, recycling e-waste helps to reduce the amount of toxic substances, such as lead and mercury, that end up in landfills and can contaminate soil and water.
However, the current state of e-waste management leaves much to be desired. A significant portion of e-waste is exported to developing countries, where it is often processed in unsafe and environmentally harmful ways. Workers in these countries, including children, are exposed to hazardous substances as they dismantle electronic devices without proper protection. Moreover, the lack of strict regulations and enforcement in these countries allows for the improper disposal of e-waste, leading to the release of toxic chemicals into the environment.
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【回答】
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[解答](要約) With a huge amount of <Electronic>(→electronic) waste accumulating in the world, <It>(→it) is inevitably necessary to handle e-waste <Properly>(→properly) for <environment>(→the environment) and human health. To protect <environment>(→the environment), there is a benefit in recycling e-waste since such throwaways can be reused as resources and can reduce the <amount>(→number) of toxic substances it produces. However, preserving e-waste entails risks. For example, developing countries import e-waste, but it makes their <inhabit>(→inhabitants) exposed <danger>(→to danger). Moreover, the reason why these countries are exposed to harmful substances is <lack>(→the lack) of rules and regulations.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) 要約は、非常によく纏まっています。しかし、英文中に、不適切に「大文字」が使われているのが気になります。また、environment には、常に the がつくことを覚えてください。さらに、the lack of rules などにおける the の用法に注意してください。of rules という風に、後ろから「限定」された名詞には、必ず「限定詞」の the がつくことも、忘れないように!
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