【質問 No. 24540】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-04-11 09:49:04 |
連日のご添削、ありがとうございます。本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
原文: Space exploration has long been a topic of fascination for many people around the world. From the early days of the Space Race between the United States and the Soviet Union to the current era of international collaboration, space exploration has captured the imagination of millions. In recent years, there has been a renewed focus on space exploration, with many countries and private companies investing heavily in new technologies and missions.
Supporters of space exploration argue that it has numerous benefits for humanity. They point out that space exploration has led to many important scientific discoveries and technological innovations, such as GPS, satellite communications, and advanced materials.
Additionally, they argue that space exploration can inspire young people to pursue careers in science, technology, engineering, and mathematics (STEM) fields, which are critical for driving economic growth and innovation.
However, critics of space exploration argue that it is an expensive and risky endeavor that diverts resources away from more pressing issues on Earth, such as poverty, hunger, and climate change. They point out that space missions are often plagued by technical problems and cost overruns, and that the benefits of space exploration are often overstated. Additionally, some critics argue that space exploration may have unintended consequences, such as the contamination of other planets with Earth-based microbes or the creation of space debris that could pose a threat to future missions.
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[解答](要約) With the United States and the Soviet Union collaborating, space exploration has attracted <attention>(→the attention) of many people. There is a benefit in space exploration in various fields of areas. Moreover, space exploration has earned recognition thanks to the investment by many countries and private companies. However, critics argue that space explosion entails a lot of risks. For example, even <best>(→the best) equipment cannot deal with technical problems and the lack of <fund>(→funds), which may cause problems <to dirty>(→of dirtying) other planets or generate space debris that could deter <reserchers>(→researchers) from <a>(→削除) future missions.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想): 素晴らしい要約になっています。私には、このような素晴らしい要約は、できないと思います。私の場合、あれも、これも、という風に、なんでも残したい気持ちになって、結局、原文と変わらない英文になってしまうかもしれません。要約は、思い切ることが大切なのですね!
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