【質問 No. 24528】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-04-10 06:55:56 |
昨日も、ありがとうございました。本日も、英文要約のご添削を、お願い致します。
[原文]: Cultural festivals have long been a part of many societies around the world. These events serve as a way to celebrate and showcase the unique traditions, customs, and artistic expressions of a particular community or region. From vibrant music and dance performances to traditional food and crafts, cultural festivals offer a rich and immersive experience for both locals and visitors alike.
Proponents of cultural festivals argue that these events play a crucial role in preserving and promoting cultural heritage. By providing a platform for artists, musicians, and craftspeople to showcase their talents, these festivals help to keep traditional art forms alive and relevant in modern times. Moreover, cultural festivals can foster a sense of pride and belonging within communities, strengthening social bonds and promoting cultural understanding.
However, critics point out that the commercialization of cultural festivals can sometimes lead to a loss of authenticity and meaning. As these events become increasingly popular and attract larger crowds, there is a risk that the original purpose and significance of the festival may be overshadowed by the pursuit of profit and tourism. Additionally, the influx of visitors during festival periods can put a strain on local infrastructure and resources, leading to environmental and social challenges that need to be carefully managed.
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[解答](要約) (It is a pity that を追加) cultural festivals have <been>(→become) amusements to promote <a particular area>(→particular areas). Visitors spend on food and having fun, which can give <benefits>(→benefits to) both the locals and tourists. With musicians and craftspeople being given a platform <for>(→as) artists, there is a benefit in holding these festivals in terms of a wide variety of <perspective>(→perspectives). However, <commercialization>(→the commercialization) of cultural <event>(→events) can entail a lot of risks such that the organizers could prioritize their profits, <and>(and at the same time,) it is also necessary to deal with problems <caused>(→often caused) by <surge>(→a surge) of millions of <people>(→people who gather at such events).
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) 今回も、内容としては、よくできています。文章中のミスを減らす努力が必要のようですね。頑張りましょう。
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