【質問 No. 24479】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-04-04 19:23:50 |
先生、前回の回答、ありがとうございました。本日も、英文要約の添削を、よろしくお願い致します。
In the digital era, the influence of social media on public opinion has become a critical area of study. Platforms like Twitter and Facebook have transformed how information is disseminated and consumed, allowing news to spread rapidly across the globe. This shift has democratized information access but also led to challenges such as the spread of misinformation and the echo chamber effect, where users are exposed only to viewpoints that align with their own.
Researchers have found that social media can significantly impact political elections, consumer behaviors, and social movements. It serves as a double-edged sword by promoting free speech and engagement but also by enabling the rapid spread of false information, which can have real-world consequences. The responsibility of managing this power falls on both the platforms, which need to implement more robust fact-checking and content moderation policies, and users, who must critically evaluate the information they consume.
Despite its drawbacks, social media remains a powerful tool for positive change, enabling grassroots movements to gain momentum and voices from marginalized communities to be heard. Its role in modern society is complex, reflecting both its potential for fostering understanding and dialogue and its capacity for amplifying divisions.
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[解答](要約) Thanks to the <dissemination>(→introduction) of the Internet, many people have become able to spread their <opinion>(→opinions) through so-called social media platforms. However, <It>(→it) entails danger such as users <could spread>(→spreading) <some>(→削除) fake news. Social media <turned head>(→is gaining great influence) <as it influenced society>(→in) society, but it <is>(→has) a flip side <that>(→to it in that) users can <speech>(→speak) freely but <spread>(→at the same time, they can spread) false information <too>(→削除). Both its potential for helping <understanding>(people understand one another) and its <capacity>(→danger) for increasing <divisions>(→divisions among the people) coexist in social media.
今回も、本文を1部、丸ごと無視する形になってしまいました。なかなか、難しいです。本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) おっしゃる通り、内容が複雑なので、要約は、容易ではありません。どれを消して、どれを活かすか、ですが、難しい選択になります。それにしては、zoro さんの要約を見ますと、全く的外れではありません。しっかりと、内容を消化して、自分の英語でまとめている点は、さすがと感心させられます。英作文の練習を兼ねた鍛錬として、続けてください。
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