【質問 No. 24441】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-03-30 15:18:55 |
本日も、英文要約の添削をよろしくお願い致します。どうしても、長くなってしまいます。必要な情報を残して要約するのは、なかなか難しいです。
[原文]: When students go to college, some decide to live at home with their parents, and others decide to rent an apartment by themselves. There are other choices, too. These days, some of them choose to share a house with roommates.
What are the reasons for this? Some students have a roommate who is good at math or science and can give advice about homework. Other students have a roommate from abroad and can learn about a foreign language through everyday conversations. Because of this, they have been able to improve their foreign language skills.
On the other hand, some students have a roommate who stays up late at night and watches TV. This can be noisy and make it difficult for others to get enough sleep. Some students have a roommate who rarely helps with cleaning the house. As a result, they have to spend a lot of time cleaning the house by themselves.
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【回答】
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[解答](要約) When students go to college, it is necessary for them to decide where they should live. For example, <one>(→some) stay home, and the <other>(→others) rent an apartment(, often with a roommateを追加). One of the reasons why some students choose to live with their roommates is that there is more to <roomsharing>(→room-sharing) than just living <a life>(→alone). They can share <with their knowledge>(→their knowledge with) one another. <There>(→However, there) is also a demerit to <roomshare>(→room-sharing). For example, <staying>(→if one stays) up late (+ at night) watching TV <will>(→, he will ) distract the <another>(other) person, which will cause <a problem>(→him a problem) such as insomnia.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) 確かに、おっしゃる通り、必要な情報を抜かさずに、要約することは、難しいと思います。しかし、喩えなどを抜かしてしまうと、、言っている事が曖昧になってしまうこともあります。そこが、要約問題では、難しい点ですね。文構造を工夫することで、例を入れても、あまり長くならない方法もあります。そこは、英作文の力で、切り抜けるしかありませんね。
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