【質問 No. 24408】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-03-23 10:12:59 |
おはようございます。本日も、英文要約の添削をお願い致します。
原文: Copenhagen, the capital city of Denmark, has emerged as a shining example of a city proactively addressing global warming. With a comprehensive and ambitious approach to sustainability, Copenhagen has set a goal to become the world's first carbon-neutral capital by 2025. The city has implemented a range of initiatives, including a robust public transportation system, extensive bike lanes, and a commitment to renewable energy sources.
One of Copenhagen's notable achievements is its focus on cycling infrastructure, encouraging residents to choose eco-friendly modes of transportation. The city has invested heavily in creating an extensive network of bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, reducing reliance on carbon-emitting vehicles.
Additionally, Copenhagen is committed to transitioning to renewable energy, with wind power playing a significant role in meeting its energy needs.
While Copenhagen's efforts are widely praised, challenges remain. Critics argue that achieving carbon neutrality by 2025 is an ambitious target and may involve trade-offs, such as increased taxes and potential economic strain. Additionally, the city faces the complexities of balancing urban development with environmental preservation. Nevertheless, Copenhagen's dedication to tackling global warming serves as an inspiring model for other cities, showcasing the potential benefits of sustainable urban planning and the importance of balancing environmental goals with economic considerations.
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[解答](要約) It is Copenhagen, the capital city of Denmark, that <addresses>(→has addressed) global warming proactively. Copenhagen has introduced transportation systems with eco-friendly models<, including a robust public transportation system, and extensive bike lanes, together with a commitment to renewable energy sources like wind generation>(→追加). <Moreover, Copenhagen has made efforts to turn to renewable energy, such as wind generation.>(→削除) However, there existed criticisms because the policy caused increased taxes and potential economic stagnation. Nevertheless, Copenhagen's tackling global warming serves <an>(→as an) important role model for other nations.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) 今回も、恐らく苦労の末に、非常にコンパクトに、要約出来ています。しかし、省略が過ぎて、中身が、薄められてしまった箇所がありましたので、具体的な例を追加させていただきました。削除させていただいたところもありますので、釣り合いは取れていると思います。ご参考になさってください。
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