【質問 No. 24430】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-03-26 10:25:02 |
先生、本日も、よろしくお願い致します。今は練習のために、簡単な問題を使っていますが、要約の文字数は、60-70 words になります。
The City of London has established an Ultra Low Emission Zone (ULEZ) to address air pollution issues. The ULEZ, which started in 2019, was originally intended to cover only the city center. However, it has now been expanded to cover the entire city of London, resulting in further controversy.
The ULEZ aims to promote the use of low-emission vehicles and reduce harmful pollutants in the city center. This initiative will improve public health and the environment while providing cleaner air.
Additionally, the ULEZ will promote long-term sustainability goals by encouraging the use of environmentally friendly transportation, such as electric vehicles.
On the other hand, <ULEZs>(→ULEZ?) have faced criticism for its impact on businesses and individuals. Driving a vehicle that does not meet emission standards through the zone will result in a charge of 12.5 pounds per day (approximately $16). This toll significantly increases the cost of driving a car. Some individuals reside in areas that are not as well-served by public transportation as those in the city center. Moreover, the rising cost of living has made it impossible for some of those people to buy a new car, so they strongly object to this measure.
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【回答】
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[解答](要約) To address air pollution issues, the city of London has introduced an Ultra Low Emission Zone (ULEZ), which has eventually covered the whole <areas in>(→area of) London. The reason why the city has encouraged the use of low-emission vehicles <was>(→is) because they improve the environmental <arrangement>(→conditions). However, <ULEZs>(→ULEZ?) <also>(→has also) caused a problem such as a high charge of <tool>(→toll). Therefore, some people have <come to be>(→become) hesitant to purchase <a new automobiles>(→new automobiles) and disagree <the idea>(→with the new policy).
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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今回も、いくつかの英語ミスを除けば、よくできた要約です。何故、語法上のミスが訂正されたか、よく考えて、英作文力を高める努力を続けてください。
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