【質問 No. 24349】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-03-16 11:25:50 |
おはようございます。本日も、もう少し簡単な英文(高校生向け)のものを選びました。ご添削を、お願い致します。
From the 1980s to the early 2000s, many national museums in Britain were charging their visitors entrance fees. The newly elected government, however, was supportive of the arts. It introduced a landmark policy to provide financial aid to museums so that they would drop their entrance fees. As a result, entrance to many national museums, including the Natural History Museum, became free of charge.
Supporters of the policy said that as it would widen access to national museums, it would have the opportunity to experience the large collections of artworks in museums and learn about the country’s cultural history.
Although surveys indicated that visitors to national museums that became free increased by an average of 70 percent after the policy’s introduction, critics claimed the policy was not completely successful. This increase, they say, mostly consisted of the same people visiting museums many times. Additionally, some independent museums with entrance fees said the policy negatively affected them. Their visitor numbers decreased because people were visiting national museums to avoid paying fees, causing the independent museums to struggle financially.
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【回答】
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[解答](要約) <At that time>(→Up until the early 2000s), the entrance <fee of>(→to) many national <amusements>(→museums) <was a fee>(→required fees). However, <After>(→after) the newly chosen government introduced a landmark legislation to provide financial aid to <the>(→national) museums, the admission became free of charge. Supporters of the policy <was>(→were) glad that many people have become able to access <to>(→削除) national museums. However, critics <claimed>(→claim) that people who visit <the museum>(→those museums) were always the <same>(→same people). Moreover, the problem occurred that the independent museums were <struggling>(→forced to struggle) due to the lack of visitors.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想)
要約問題は、英作文問題にも通じる面があり、原文の内容把握と、英文表現力の、2つの面を評価することができるので、今後、出題が増えるものと、考えられます。zoro さんは、要約の点では、よくできているのですが、英語表現力の点で、まだ、躓(つまず)くところがあるので、英作文力にも、力を投入しましょう。
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