【質問 No. 24301】 英文要約添削依頼(解答) |
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2024-03-09 13:07:33 |
おはようございます。本日は、今までの英文があまりにも難しいため、少し簡単なものを使いました。高校生むけの文章のためか、易しく感じました。ご添削をお願い致します。
[原文] EV stands for “Electric Vehicle.” In Japan, the term is mainly used to refer to electric cars. Since many countries have decided to ban the sale of gasoline-powered vehicles by 2035, EVs will be the main vehicles on the road in the future.
The most important feature of EVs is that they are environmentally friendly. Since they run on electricity, they do not emit exhaust gas as gasoline-powered cars do. Moreover, the price of gasoline is dependent on imports from other countries and may rise depending on international conditions, but the price of electricity used in EVs does not fluctuate as much as gasoline and is cheaper.
On the downside, the selling price of EVs tends to be higher than gasoline-powered vehicles. That’s why some people refrain from purchasing EVs. In addition, they take a lot of time to recharge. As of the end of March 2023, there were about 20,000 EV charging spots in Japan, still far from the ideal number. Compared to gasoline-powered vehicles, which take only about five minutes to refuel, EVs can take tens of minutes to several hours to recharge.
[解答](要約) <It is common for Japanese people to call Electric Vehicle "EV".>(→削除) The time will come when EVs become <a main stream>(→mainstream) since many countries have decided to prohibit the sale of gasoline-driven cars by 2035.
EVs are environmentally friendly, and the fuel <do>(→does) not rely on <international conditions.(→gasoline). However, some people are hesitant to buy EVs due to <its>(→their) high price and the fear that they take a lot of time to <storage>(→recharge).
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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要約の最初の英文は、重要なことではないので、削除させていただきました。纏めすぎかもしれませんが、要点は尽くしていますので、これでよし、とすることにしましょう!
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