【質問 No. 23985】 英作文の添削依頼(前編) |
zoro |
2024-01-26 06:12:02 |
先生、ご添削ありがとうございました。今回も、私が勝手に考えた課題になりますが、添削をよろしくお願い致します。
課題: The lack of female leaders is a serious problem.
I agree with the <idea>(→opinion) that the lack of female leaders is a serious problem, for the following reasons. For example, there is a lack of female leaders <at>(→in) the diet, holding only 10% of parliamentary seats. There <are huge>(→is a huge) amount of complaints and <demand>(→demands) <of people>(→from the people) that politicians should deal with, but this lack of women representation hinders women’s voices in decision-making processes, making it difficult <solve>(→to solve) a huge amount of problems that only female <politician>(→politicians) can handle <accurately>(→in the most appropriate way).
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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原文に直接添削しましたので、ご参考になさってください。
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