【質問 No. 25939】 要約問題添削依頼(中編) |
zoro |
2024-11-25 00:46:14 |
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昨日の、要約問題の続きを、よろしくお願い致します。
A: Another critical aspect of public safety is the design of public spaces. Urban planning and design can contribute significantly to safety by incorporating features such as good lighting, clear sightlines, and open layouts that discourage criminal behavior and enhance the perception of safety.
[解答](要約) It is the design of public spaces that is another critical aspect of public safety. Urban planning and design are crucial to <emcompass>(→encompass) various security measures.
B: However, enhancing public safety in public spaces also presents challenges. There is a delicate balance between ensuring security and preserving individual freedoms and privacy.
[解答](要約) However, contrary to <its safety>(→the various safety measures), there are also issues. For example, a delicate balance <exists>(→should exist) to protect <individual's>(→individuals') anonymity.
C: Over-surveillance and excessive police presence can lead to concerns about civil liberties and the potential for discrimination.
[解答](要約) Over-surveillance and excessive police presence can rob citizens of their freedom.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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「要約」の評価は難しいので、要約文のミスの訂正だけに留めておきます。
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