【質問 No. 23297】 英作文の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2023-11-02 05:35:10 |
先生、前回のご回答ありがとうございました。再び修正したい英作文がありますので、ご添削をお願い致します。
Agree or disagree: Global overpopulation is a serious threat to the future of humankind
1. 「最後に、皆が知る通り、地球温暖化が問題になっているが、その原因は、車の排気ガスやゴミの焼却などといった、人間が作り出す二酸化炭素が原因である」
Lastly, as everyone knows, the global warming has become a serious problem, and its causes are carbon dioxide produced by humans such as exhausted gases from vehicles and garbage burning.
2. 「人口が増えれば増える程、地球温暖化は加速するだろう」
The more the population increases, the more the global warming accelerates.
3. 「また、大気汚染はひどくなっており、それは人口の多い都市に集中している」
Also, air polution becomes terrible, which is concentrated in urban areas that have a large number of population.
本日もよろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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1. Lastly, as everyone knows, <global> warming has become a serious problem, and its causes are carbon dioxide produced by humans such as <exhaust> gases from vehicles and garbage burning.
2. The more the population increases, the more the global warming accelerates.
3. Also, air <pollution> becomes terrible, <and> is concentrated in urban areas that have a <large> population.
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