【質問 No. 22552】 英作文の添削依頼(後編) |
zoro |
2023-08-11 05:37:55 |
先生、ご添削ありがとうございました。Invoice system is necessary. の後編の、添削をよろしくお願い致します。
1.「最後に、金持ちと貧乏との間には、大きな格差が存在する」
Lastly, there exists a large income gap between rich people and poor people.
2.「金持ちには、高い累進課税が適用されているため、一般の人への、税の負担は軽くなっている」
It is a fact that a large graduated taxing system is applied to rich people, so the burden of taxes on poor people are made lighter.
3.「貧困層の人達を支えるためにも、インボイス制度は廃止し、金持ちは、国に税を多く収める義務から、逃れるべきではない」
In order to support poverty people, invoice system should be abolished and rich people should not shark their responsibility to pay large taxes to the government.
本日もよろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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1. → Lastly, there exists a large income gap between rich and poor people.
2. → However, a large graduated taxing system is applied to rich people, so the burden of taxes on poor people is made lighter.
3. Nevertheless, the incoming invoice system affecting everybody in business seems to me to prey on the poorer people.
4. Thus, my conclusion is that in order to help poorer people, the invoice system should be abolished and, instead, make rich people share more responsibility to pay more taxes to the government.
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