【質問 No. 24883】 英文要約添削依頼(解答) |
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2024-05-30 08:54:40 |
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[原文] Throughout history, political systems have profoundly influenced human societies, shaping the way people live, govern, and interact with each other. This evolution of political systems is marked by three significant phases: the development of ancient political structures, the transformation during the Enlightenment, and the contemporary era of global politics.
Ancient political structures laid the foundation for modern governance. Early forms of government, such as the city-states of ancient Greece and the Roman Republic, introduced concepts like democracy and republicanism. In Athens, for example, democracy allowed citizens to participate directly in political decision-making, a revolutionary idea at the time. These ancient systems, though limited in scope and inclusivity, set the stage for later political thought and development. They introduced the notion of governance by the people and for the people, influencing future political ideologies and systems.
The Enlightenment period, spanning the 17th and 18th centuries, marked a significant transformation in political thought. Philosophers like John Locke, Voltaire, and Jean-Jacques Rousseau challenged the traditional notions of governance, advocating for individual rights, liberty, and the separation of powers. This era saw the emergence of social contract theory, suggesting that governments derive their authority from the consent of the governed. The political ideas of the Enlightenment played a pivotal role in shaping modern democracies and inspired revolutionary movements, including the American and French Revolutions.
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In the contemporary era, global politics are characterized by a complex interplay of democracy, authoritarianism, and emerging challenges like globalization and digital governance. The rise of international organizations and transnational issues, such as climate change and human rights, has expanded the scope of political science. Today’s political landscape is also influenced by technology and social media, which have transformed political communication and public engagement. These developments present new challenges and opportunities for governance, requiring adaptive and inclusive political systems that can address the dynamic needs of a globalized world.
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[解答](要約) Political systems such as a wide variety of political regulations were very important for the <life>(→lives) of people. Ancient political structures originated from ancient Greece and the Roman Republic, which introduced the concept of allowing people to participate <politics>(→in politics). In the 17th and 18th centuries, there have arisen many philosophies<, insisting>(→that insisted) human rights and liberties. With <introduction>(→the introduction) of digital governance and globalization <by>(→through) technology and social media, it has <given>(→削除) transformed political communication and public engagement. This development continues to require adaptive and inclusive political systems that can handle the huge amount of needs of a globalized world.
よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) 自分の言葉で、これだけの要約ができることに、感心しています。今回は、基礎的なミスもなく、上々の仕上がりです。引き続き、頑張ってください。
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