【質問 No. 24873】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-05-29 09:07:22 |
先生、前回も、添削を、ありがとうございました。本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
[原文] The Renaissance, a period spanning from the 14th to the 17th century, marks a profound transformation in European history, characterized by a rebirth in art, culture, and intellectual thought. This era, originating in Italy and gradually spreading across Europe, is distinguished by three significant developments: the revival of classical learning, the flourishing of artistic expression, and the impact of these changes on society and future generations.
The revival of classical learning, known as humanism, is the cornerstone of the Renaissance. Scholars and thinkers turned back to the ancient texts of Greece and Rome, seeking knowledge and inspiration from the works of Plato, Aristotle, and other classical philosophers. This renewed interest in classical culture led to a shift in education, emphasizing the study of humanities -- literature, history, philosophy, and languages. The humanistic approach championed the potential of the individual, fostering an environment where intellectual inquiry and rational thought were highly valued. This shift laid the groundwork for modern Western thought and education. Artistically, the Renaissance is heralded as an age of unparalleled creative achievement. Artists like Leonardo da Vinci, Michelangelo, and Raphael pushed the boundaries of artistic expression, blending classical techniques with innovative styles.
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Their works, characterized by realism, attention to human anatomy, and use of perspective, marked a departure from the rigid and symbolic style of medieval art. The artistic achievements of the Renaissance did not merely reflect aesthetic advancements but also symbolized the era’s deeper exploration of human experience and the natural world. The influence of the Renaissance extended beyond its time, shaping the course of European history and culture. Its emphasis on individualism and human potential laid the foundation for the Enlightenment and the modern world. The cultural and intellectual legacies of the Renaissance continue to resonate, evident in our appreciation for art, our approach to learning, and our understanding of human potential.
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[解答](要約) It is <well concidered>(→considered) that the Renaissance was <era>(→an era) that <has>(→削除) introduced <art>(→classical art), culture, and <efficient>(→削除) thought. There were a lot of things to learn in <era>(→this era), which created an environment where <contemplate>(→contemplation) of people <were>(→was) highly valued. The Renaissance symbolized the era’s scour <a>(→and a) new age. This shift laid the foundation for modern <western>(→Western) thought and education. Moreover, artists <has>(→have) helped introduce a wide variety of <measures>(→works) to influence people. The influence of the Renaissance still <remain>(→remains) alive in modern society.
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[回答](感想) この要約で、ルネサンスというものの真髄を、伝えられるか、不安になります。The Renaissance symbolized the era's scour and a new age. の文章の意味がわかりません。一言で言えば、ルネサンスとは、ギリシャ・ローマの古典文化の復興、ということだと思います。なお、今回は、初歩的な文法ミスが、多かったように感じます。せっかくの内容も、基本的な文法ミスで、台無しにならないよう、気をつけてください。
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