【質問 No. 24856】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-05-27 05:10:38 |
先生、前回への添削、ありがとうございました。本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
[原文] The integration of technology in education has ushered in a new era, redefining traditional pedagogies and reshaping the student experience. This transformative journey is characterized by the amalgamation of digital tools in teaching, the evolution of educational methodologies, and the emerging challenges in the digital learning landscape. Firstly, the digital tools have revolutionized classroom environments. Interactive whiteboards, educational apps, and virtual laboratories have replaced conventional teaching aids, fostering an interactive and engaging learning atmosphere. These advancements facilitate diverse learning experiences, allowing educators to present complex concepts through multimedia and interactive simulations. The integration of technology in classrooms has not only diversified teaching methods but also enabled personalized learning experiences. Students can now access a wide array of resources online, tailoring their educational journey to their individual needs and pace.
The second paradigm shift is the rise of online education. The proliferation of e-learning platforms and virtual classrooms has made education more accessible and flexible. Institutions worldwide offer a variety of online courses, breaking geographical barriers and enabling lifelong learning opportunities. This model supports not just traditional students but also professionals seeking to upgrade their skills, providing a platform for continuous education. The flexibility of online learning, allowing students to balance education with other life commitments, has been a game changer in making education inclusive and adaptable to the needs of a diverse student body.
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However, this rapid integration of technology in education is not without challenges. The digital divide poses a significant barrier, with unequal access to technology and the internet exacerbating educational disparities. Additionally, the reliance on technology in education raises concerns about the development of interpersonal skills and the potential impact on mental health due to increased screen time.
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[解答](要約) Thanks to the digital tools in education, teaching methods <has>(→have) been dramatically progressing. Digital tools can give a wide variety of methods to the students and create better learning environment, enabling them to receive order-made learning. There are a lot of advantages to e-learning in that it can offer <variety>(→a variety) of online courses for students, and it is possible for them to study anywhere. However, there <is>(→are) also problems such that IT illiteracy makes it hard to access mobile devices smoothly, <in addition>(→and that, in addition), <glueing>(→the gluing) screen can cause withdrawal syndrome.
よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答] (感想) 最近は、大分、要約に慣れてこられた模様で、一定の「パターン」が、見られるようになったことを、感じます。such as ~ にしても、~ に節が来る場合の such that ... などの構文が出てくるなど、驚かされます。後は、単数・複数などについて、うっかりミスが、出てくる程度になりました。一度書いたら、2~3回、読み直したりすれば、自分で直せるミスなので、気をつけてください。
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