【質問 No. 24843】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
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2024-05-25 19:05:32 |
先生、ご添削ありがとうございました。本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
[原文] The ongoing debate about the role of Japan in the global economy encompasses its unique position as a technological innovator and its influence on international trade dynamics. Japan, as the world’s third-largest economy, has been a significant player in shaping global economic trends, yet it faces unique challenges and opportunities in today’s rapidly changing economic landscape. Japan’s economy is renowned for its strong emphasis on technology and manufacturing, particularly in fields such as automotive and electronics. These sectors have not only driven the country’s economic growth but also set global standards in quality and innovation. Japan’s commitment to research and development continually fuels advancements in these industries, contributing significantly to the global market. However, Japan grapples with internal demographic challenges, including an aging population and a shrinking workforce, which pose significant threats to its future economic sustainability. To address these, the government is focusing on policies that encourage workforce participation among women and the elderly, and is gradually opening up to foreign labor.
In the international arena, Japan’s economic policies are characterized by a balance between national interests and global cooperation. The country is a proponent of free trade, actively participating in international trade agreements and partnerships. Japan’s approach to environmental sustainability, especially in terms of reducing carbon emissions and promoting renewable energy, has also enhanced its global standing.
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【回答】
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Yet, Japan faces geopolitical challenges in the Asia-Pacific region, including trade tensions and security concerns, which require careful navigation. Japan’s role in the global economy is a dynamic narrative of managing internal challenges while capitalizing on external opportunities. Its future as a global economic leader will depend on how effectively it can adapt to demographic changes, maintain its technological edge, and navigate international relations. Balancing these factors is crucial for Japan to continue its legacy as a key player in the global economic landscape.
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[解答](要約) Japan is one of the three economic powers and it is a leading country in the world. Thanks to technology and industrial innovation, Japan has <play the>(→been playing an) important role <to lead>(→in leading) other countries. However, there <are>(→is) a pile of problems in Japan due to <low>(→the low) birth rate and aging population, so it is inevitable for the government to encourage women's active participation in society, and recruit senior citizens and foreign workers. Moreover, Japan <have>(→has) to make efforts to contribute to alleviating global warming. Japan should make <its'>(→its) existence <coexist>(→go along) with international <relationship>(→relationships) and competitive edge.
可算、不可算に関しては、いくつか暗記はしたのですが、全ては不可能であることが分かりました。また、a と the に関しても、ネイティブが出している、動画も見たのですが、完璧に使いこなせるようには、なりませんでした。
以上、よろしく、お願いします。
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[回答](感想) 相変わらず、要約作業は、順調に続けられているようですね。私なら、もっと長い要約になってしまいそうですが、うまくやり切っていますね! なお、加算・不加算の問題や、冠詞の用法などを、一夜にして、覚えてしまおうと思っては、いけません。長い時間をかけて、自然と身についていくものです。それには、英字新聞などを、これでもか、これでもか、と飽くことなく、読み続けることです。ネイティブにしても、一夜にして身につけたものではないのですから・・・。
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