【質問 No. 24835】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-05-24 09:44:25 |
おはようございます。本日も、英文要約の、添削をお願い致します。
[原文] The question of whether scientific advancements are always beneficial is a topic of significant debate, touching upon various aspects of modern society. While scientific progress has undoubtedly brought remarkable benefits, it also poses certain risks and ethical dilemmas. This debate is central to understanding the impact of science on our lives and the environment.
Scientific advancements in fields like medicine, technology, and environmental science have dramatically improved quality of life. Breakthroughs in medical research have led to the development of life-saving treatments and vaccines, while technological innovations have transformed communication, transportation, and industry, driving global economic growth. Environmental science has provided critical insights into climate change and biodiversity, informing sustainable practices. However, these advancements also come with challenges. In medicine, issues such as antibiotic resistance and the ethical implications of genetic editing are concerns. Technological progress, while connecting the world, has raised issues around privacy, data security, and the impact of artificial intelligence on employment. Environmental advancements often struggle against economic and political interests, hindering effective action against climate change. Furthermore, the distribution of the benefits and risks of scientific advancements is often unequal. While some parts of the world gain immensely from new technologies and medical breakthroughs, others are left behind, exacerbating existing inequalities.
Additionally, the pace of scientific progress can outstrip ethical considerations and regulatory frameworks, leading to potential risks that are not fully understood or managed.
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【回答】
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The debate over the benefits and drawbacks of scientific advancements underscores the need for a balanced approach that considers ethical, environmental, and social implications. As science continues to advance, it is crucial to ensure that its benefits are distributed equitably and that potential risks are carefully managed. The future of scientific progress depends on our ability to navigate these complex issues responsibly.
Scientific advancements bring considerable benefits in medicine, technology, and environmental science, improving life quality and driving economic growth. However, they also present challenges, including ethical dilemmas in medicine, privacy concerns in technology, and clashes with economic interests in environmental issues. The unequal distribution of these advancements exacerbates global disparities. The debate highlights the importance of a balanced approach, integrating ethical, environmental, and social considerations into scientific progress. Ensuring equitable benefits and managing potential risks are essential for responsible scientific advancement. This ongoing discussion underscores the complexity of harnessing science for global betterment while addressing its inherent challenges and ethical implications.
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[解答](要約) Although scientific progress has been recognized as one of the leading innovations, it has also <arisen>(→caused) certain concerns and ethical dilemmas. Scientific advances can give a lot of benefits in various fields. Moreover, environmental science has given critical acumen <into>(→to) climate change. However, there are also disadvantages to technological progress such as privacy, data security, and unemployment caused by automation. As our society continues to be digitalized, we have to continue to deal with convenience and potential risks <thanks to>(→caused by) scientific advancements.
なお、添削して頂いた文章は、保存して、読み返しているのですが、「可算・不可算」が、とても苦手で、提出前に辞書で調べているのですが、よく直されます。これは、暗記をするしかないのでしょうか? よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) 英語は、規則通りに行くことが少なく、ネーティブの人は、どうやって、操っているのだろう、と考えてしまうことがあります。冠詞の有無、単数複数、といった問題は、外国人は、先ず、一生かけても、克服することは、できないだろう、と悲観的になってしまいます。それでも、一歩でも、ネイティブの英語に、近づきたいと願っている次第です。
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