【質問 No. 24778】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
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2024-05-19 05:39:33 |
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Travel and tourism, sectors integral to global cultural exchange and economic development, have undergone significant transformation. This article explores the evolution of these industries through three lenses: the changing nature of travel experiences, the impact of tourism on cultural exchange, and the challenges facing the tourism industry in the modern world.
Travel experiences have evolved dramatically over the years, influenced by technological advancements and shifting traveler preferences. Gone are the days when travel was a luxury afforded by a few; it has now become more accessible and diverse. The advent of affordable air travel, online booking platforms, and virtual reality tours have revolutionized how people plan and experience their journeys. Additionally, there is a growing trend towards experiential travel, where visitors seek authentic, immersive experiences that offer deeper cultural insights rather than just sightseeing. This shift reflects a broader desire for meaningful connections with different cultures and a deeper understanding of the world. The impact of tourism on cultural exchange is profound. It fosters a mutual exchange of ideas, customs, and traditions, enriching both travelers and host communities. Tourism provides opportunities for cultural preservation, as it can generate interest and financial resources for maintaining historical sites, traditional arts, and local practices.
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The tourism industry faces several challenges in today’s global context. The COVID-19 pandemic, in particular, has had a dramatic impact, leading to travel restrictions and a significant decline in tourism revenue. This crisis has highlighted the need for the industry to adapt and innovate, focusing on sustainable and responsible tourism models that can withstand such challenges. Furthermore, the industry must address environmental concerns, ensuring that tourism development does not come at the cost of ecological degradation or cultural integrity.
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[解答](要約)Travel and tourism industries have <improved>(→influenced) a wide variety of sectors. Although travel <was a luxury thing>(→was once a luxury) for ordinary people, it has now become <accessible>(→accessible for ordinary people) thanks to technological progress. However, there have also arisen problems. For example, <the>(→when the) new corona virus pandemic occurred, tourism industries could not make enough profits, which made them <rethink their>(→think more of) sustainable and resistible <environment>(→environmental) arrangements.
よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) 今回の要約は、原文の方向性を、やや外れる結果となりましたが、私からの修正によって、多少是正されたか、と思われます。何故、修正されたかについて、よく考えてください。
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