【質問 No. 24757】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-05-16 09:04:36 |
先生、ご添削ありがとうございました。原文が大分長くなりまして、恐縮ですが、英文要約の、ご添削をお願い致します。
[原文] The evolution of remote work, a trend accelerated by the COVID-19 pandemic, has brought about substantial changes in the global workforce. This shift from traditional office-centric models to remote or hybrid models of work is not only redefining workplace dynamics but also influencing broader socio-economic aspects.
Initially, remote work was adopted as a necessity to maintain business continuity during lockdowns. However, it quickly demonstrated numerous advantages. For employees, it offered unprecedented flexibility and a better work-life balance, reducing commute times and allowing for a more personalized work environment. Employers benefited from access to a wider talent pool, unconstrained by geographical boundaries, and reported increases in productivity. The adoption of digital tools for communication and collaboration, such as video conferencing and cloud-based platforms, became widespread, enhancing the feasibility of remote work.
Despite these benefits, the transition to remote work presents challenges. The blurring of boundaries between personal and professional life can lead to increased stress and burnout. The lack of physical interaction and casual office conversations can impact team cohesion and company culture. Additionally, not all industries or roles are conducive to remote work, leading to disparities in who can leverage these benefits. There’s also a growing concern about the digital divide, as not everyone has equal access to the technology and infrastructure required for effective remote work. (解答欄に続く)
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【回答】
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As the world adapts to the new normal, the concept of remote work continues to evolve. It is increasingly being viewed not just as a temporary response to a global crisis but as a permanent feature of the modern work landscape. This shift is likely to have long-term implications on urban planning, real estate, and environmental sustainability, as reduced commuting contributes to lower carbon emissions.
[解答](要約) After the COVID-19 pandemic, it has become a trend for people to work <home>(→from home), which made it easier <for>(→for them to) contact with people all over the world. There is a large <advantages>(→advantage) to remote work such as <saving commute times>(→the time saved by non-commuting) and <concentrating a>(→concentration on) more personalized work environment. However, remote work can often give employees <phychological>(→psychological) stress due to their solitude and the mix of <demarcation>(→the demarcation) line between work and play. Moreover, some people are computer <illiteracy>(→illiterate) and are not good at communication through social media <pratforms>(→platforms). Nevertheless, it appears the progress of remote communication cannot stop.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想) 中身の濃い、長文を、うまく要約しましたね。後は、文章の繋ぎ方の問題でしょう。修正された箇所をよく考えて、英語の学びに繋げてください。
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