【質問 No. 24748】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-05-14 06:22:28 |
私の要約を、お褒め頂きまして、ありがとうございます。やはり、英作文と要約には、重要な関係がありますね。英作文のフレーズが頭に入っていれば、「言い換え」を、素早く出来ることが分かりました。本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
[原文] Education systems worldwide have undergone significant reforms to adapt to changing societal needs. The traditional model of rote memorization and standardized testing is giving way to more student-centered approaches that emphasize critical thinking, creativity, and problem-solving skills. This shift aims to better prepare learners for a rapidly evolving job market where adaptability and innovation are highly valued. However, implementing these reforms comes with challenges such as updating teaching methodologies and measuring non-traditional skills.
[解答](要約) To adopt societal needs, educational methods have dramatically <improving>(→changed). The traditional education can give a wide variety of merits to students. <Moreover>(However), the purpose <for>(of) this change is to prepare students for a progressing job market. Nevertheless, it is inevitable to update teaching methodologies to <achive goal>(→achieve new goals).
よろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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今回は、古典的な教育法と、最新の教育法の違いが重要な点なので、その線に沿った「要約」が求められます。私からの修正で、かなり是正されましたが、原文の内容から、やや離脱したものになっていました!
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