【質問 No. 24715】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-05-09 09:59:59 |
おはようございます。サンプルの文章が短くなりますが、本日も、英文要約の添削を、お願い致します。
原文1: The effects of climate change are becoming increasingly evident around the world. Rising global temperatures are causing more frequent and severe heatwaves, leading to droughts in many regions. Additionally, the melting ice caps are contributing to rising sea levels, posing a significant threat to coastal communities.
[解答](要約) Due to the effects of climate change, <temperature>(→the temperature) of the earth has been rising, causing droughts in many countries. <Nowadays>(→On the other hand), many people in coastal communities are suffering from <disasters>(→high tides) caused by global warming.
原文2: As technology continues to advance at an unprecedented pace, the role of artificial intelligence (AI) in various industries is becoming more pronounced. From automating routine tasks to enabling complex data analysis, AI is revolutionizing how businesses operate. However, concerns about job displacement due to automation and the ethical implications of AI decision-making are topics that continue to spark debates.
[解答](要約) With the progress of AI technology, it has been sought after in <businesse>(→the business) world. However, the dissemination of AI technology is causing a <debete>(→problem) such as job loss.
1番のように、主語を「人」に変えるのは、とてもやりやすいやり方なのですが、この方法は、あまりよくはありませんか?
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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これまでと比べて、大分、原文が短くなりましたね。原文そのものが、何か長文の要約のようにさえ、思われます。ところで、英語の固い文章は、いわゆる「無生物主語」が大半なのですが、日本語では、無生物主語は、あまり多くありません。無生物主語の文章に慣れてくると、その方が、表現の幅が増えたように、感じられるものです。
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