【質問 No. 24671】 英文要約の添削依頼 |
zoro |
2024-05-03 19:02:39 |
本日も、英文要約の添削を、よろしくお願い致します。
原文: The ongoing debate regarding the impact of social media on youth mental health is a topic of significant concern. Social media platforms, while providing a space for connectivity and self-expression, also expose young users to various stressors. These include cyberbullying, social comparison, and the pressure to maintain an idealized online persona. The constant exposure to such environments is contributing to increased rates of anxiety and depression among young individuals.
However, social media also has positive aspects. It offers youths opportunities for social engagement and community building, particularly for those who may feel isolated in their physical environments. Platforms can serve as outlets for creative expression and sources of informational and educational content. This dual nature of social media makes it a complex but integral part of modern youth culture.
Addressing the challenges posed by social media requires a multifaceted approach. Education about digital literacy and responsible online behavior is crucial. Parents, educators, and mental health professionals need to work together to provide support and guidance. Additionally, there is a growing call for social media companies to implement stronger measures to protect young users from harmful content and interactions.
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【回答】
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[解答](要約) Social media platforms could lead young people to terrible stress due to cyber harassment, social hierarchy, and their fake personality. Nevertheless, there is a benefit to social media in that young people who are not good at building communication in the real world can get to know one another.
To combat problems caused by wrong net-etiquette, it is important to introduce rules and regulations.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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[回答](感想と、提案) 今回も、長く、難しい論説を、分かりやすく要約できました。英検や、TOEIC などでの「要約」問題には、これで充分と思われますが、より論理性を求められる「論文」や「論説」を書く場合は、昔から、漢詩の構成に倣(なら)って、「起・承・転・結」という原理を使うことが、勧められます。
「起承転結」とは、英語で言えば、Introduction - Development - Conclusion という、議論の進め方を言います。今回の問題で言えば、1. The ongoing debate regarding the impact of social media on youth mental health is a topic of significant concern. 2. However, social media also has positive aspects. It offers youths opportunities for social engagement and community building ... 3. Addressing the challenges posed by social media requires a multifaceted approach. 4. To combat problems caused by wrong net-etiquette, it is important to introduce rules and regulations. といった内容になるかと思われます。今後の課題においては、この方式を試してみませんか?
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