【質問 No. 23415】 英作文の添削依頼 |
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2023-11-15 16:07:28 |
連日のご添削を、ありがとうございます。本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
課題: Is holding Osaka-Banpaku useful?
1. 「私は、大阪万博開催は有益だと思う」
I think that holding Osaka-Banpaku is useful, for the following reasons.
2. 「大阪万博開催には、経済を刺激し、地域を推進し、そして世界中からたくさんの観光客を取り込むという点で、利点がある。人々が宿泊、食事、楽しい時間を過ごせば、それは経済にとって良い」
Firstly, there is a benefit in organizing Osaka-Banpaku, in that it should boost the economy, promote the area, and bring in a large number of tourists from all over the world. If people spend acommodation, food and having fun, it is good for the economy.
3. 「大阪万博が開催されれば、 レストラン、売店、建築などの分野で、たくさんの労働力が必要となる。 全体の雇用が増えれば、経済効果が上がるだけではなく、国民生活は楽になる」
Moreover, if Osaka-Banpaku is held, a huge amount of labor force will be needed in the various fields of restaurants, product stalls, and constractions. If the whole labor forces expand, it will not only boost the economy but also lessen the burden on the lives of people.
4. 「最後に、大阪万博は子供達の教育に有益である。もし教師が教科書だけ使って授業をしたら、子供達は飽きてしまうかもしれないが、教師が子供達を万博へ連れて行けば、子供達は、最新のデジタル技術に直接触れる体験を通じて、より深い興味を持つことが出来るだろう」
Lastly, Holding Osaka-Banpaku can be useful for educating children. If teachers give lessons by using only text books, children might get bored, but if they take their children to those sites, they can get them to become more interested in the state-of the art technology by touching it directly.
本日も、よろしくお願い致します。
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【回答】
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1. I think that holding Osaka-Banpaku is useful, for the following reasons.
2. Firstly, there is an economic benefit in organizing Osaka-Banpaku, in that it should boost the economy of Japan, promote the area, and bring in a large number of tourists from all over the world. If people spend on accommodation, food, and having fun, it is good for the economy.
3. Moreover, if Osaka-Banpaku is held, a huge amount of labor force will be needed in the various fields of restaurants, product stalls, and construction. If the whole labor force expands, it will not only boost the economy but also give benefits to the lives of people.
4. Lastly, Holding Osaka-Banpaku can be useful for educating children. If teachers give lessons by using only textbooks, children might get bored, but if they take their children to those sites, they can get them to become more interested in state-of-the-art technology by observing and touching it directly.
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