【質問 No. 22978】 省略と代名詞について |
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2023-09-23 12:52:38 |
Therefore, an effective story always leaves room for the person who is consuming it. There has to be enough detail to make the narrative compelling, but not so much that it leaves out the audience. Effective fiction stories, music, and art leave room for readers, listeners, and viewers to fill in the gaps with their imagination. Whether you know it consciously or not, you're influencing others in every one of your interactions.
1. but not so much that it leaves out the audience は、省略されているものを補うと、but (there does) not (have to be) so much (detail) that it leaves out the audience. という形になりますか?
2. "but not so much that it leaves out the audience" の "it" は、何を指しますか? "the narrative"でしょうか?
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【回答】
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1. の but not so much that it leaves out the audience とは、「(詳細は)読者を除け者にしてしまうほど、多くある必要はありません」ということなので、おっしゃる通りの書き換えは、これで、正しいことになります。
2. ここの it は、detail を指しています。
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